Last Updated on July 30, 2023
Are you an international student writing your personal statement? If so, you’re in luck! The team at OBAS have put together this handy guide to help you write your personal statement. This guide is specifically tailored to help you write a personal statements to support your application to a UK boarding school. Overseas or international students will need to submit a personal statement when applying to most British schools. Theyโre not normally required for short courses, like summer schools.
What is a personal statement?
A personal statement is a short essay that tells the admissions staff more about you and why youโre a suitable candidate for their school. Itโs a chance to highlight your skills, achievements, goals and explain why you want to study in the UK.
How long should a personal statement be?
We suggest one A4 page, around 350 – 500 words, for an international student’s personal statement. Try to keep your statement focussed on the points above and avoid including unnecessary information.
What should an international student personal statement include?
- Tell the school why you want to study in the UK. Explain what interests you about studying in the UK and what you want to gain from it. If youโve undertaken some of your education or examinations in English already, mention it here.
- Include details of any extra-curricular activities that you do, such as hobbies, clubs and interests. Explain what you enjoy about them, include any relevant skills that they help you develop, such as teamwork or independence.
- Mention your past achievements, both academic and non-academic. Try to describe any difficulties you faced and how you overcame them, this will help to show the school your personal strengths.
- If youโve previously been to the UK to attend an educational course, summer school or similar, include details of it, why you did it and what you learnt from it.
- Tell the school about your plans for the future. Include any plans for higher education and your career aspirations. Try to explain how studying in the UK could help you succeed with your goals.
Top tips for an international student personal statement
1. You only get one personal statement
Your personal statement submitted through the OBAS platform will be sent to all the schools you apply to, so make sure you donโt mention any specific schools that you are applying to in your statement. You can name previous schools or courses youโve attended though.
2. Give it a structure
Simply structuring your statement with a beginning, middle and end will go a long way. It makes your statement easier to read and demonstrates good essay writing skills to the reader.
Start your statement with an introduction that briefly explains your reasons for applying, then expand on this in the main part of the statement โ remember to include the points we mentioned here. Finally, finish your statement with a conclusion reiterating why youโre suitable for the school.
3. Read it, re-read it, then read it again
We recommend you start writing your personal statement early so you have plenty of time to perfect it. After youโve written a draft, read through it and check for spelling and grammar mistakes.
Once youโve done this, ask someone you trust; like a parent, teacher or your educational recruiter to read your personal statement and give you their opinion. Remember, once your personal statement has been uploaded to OBAS, it cannot be changed.
Dos and Donโts for an international student personal statement
Dos
- Try to use your best English
- Show your enthusiasm for studying
- Talk about any courses youโve already attended in the UK
- Ask people you trust to check your statement
- Write about your strengths and achievements
- Draft and edit your statement several times before submitting
- Use paragraphs to make it easier to read
Don’ts
- Donโt leave your statement until the last minute
- Donโt rely on a spellchecker or grammar service
- Donโt copy and paste from other peopleโs personal statements
- Donโt name the specific school(s) you are applying to
- Donโt copy and paste from any type of translator
- Donโt exaggerate about your skills and achievements
- Donโt worry if English isnโt your first language
- Donโt try to sound too clever
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